Friday, January 11, 2008

The Water Falls


The water falls like smoke,

curling up like flower petals

and shines like wet stars.

Sunlight makes it shine.

The water shines pink.

The waterfall smells

like morning daisies and

chases the rainbow

across the morning.

By Addison D. Caldwell

2 comments:

Adams family said...

Addi, this poem reminds me of all the waterfalls that we have hiked to when I came to visit you. I miss an love you!

deeder6 said...

Addison, I had no idea you were such a great writer! Did you write this for school or just because? I love it and I love you!